Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Area of Improvement Question

This where you post for any areas of improvement.

9 comments:

  1. Sydeny, you did an amzing job! Maybe use more catchy tiles for each article! Like you got to risk it to get the biscut! Good job!

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  2. Great job. The only thing that I think you could change is to have a different poll question because it is the same question in the responce question. But great job!

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  3. There was so much information that I would have liked a few suprising or intersting facts in the bio to keep me even more interested!

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  4. You did a great job on your blog, there is not much to change, or anything that needs to be improved. But you could change your pool question, and find more interesting pictures.

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  5. I think that your blog was great! I would say maybe you could get cooler pictures or something.

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  6. I think that maybe you should have made bullet points for fun facts, not a paragraph. Just to make it a little more attractive and different.

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  7. I loved your blog, but you could have had more catchy titles to keep your readers more interested.

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  8. Your blog was my favortie so far but, i agree with everybody else I think you need more intersting facts

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